Core Message & Clarity
5/5
| # | Criterion | Evaluation | Source | Result |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Benefit word exists | [ON-VIDEO] 'special' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 2 | Brand/product name exists | [ON-VIDEO] 'deliveroo' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 3 | No more than one tagline | Not found | NONE | PASS |
| 4 | Audience word exists | [ON-VIDEO] 'your' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 5 | Product visible | [ON-VIDEO] 'deliveroo' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
Originality
4/5
| # | Criterion | Evaluation | Source | Result |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Non-stock visual | [ON-VIDEO] 'Deliveroo Plus Gold' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 2 | Brand-specific words | [ON-VIDEO] 'Deliveroo Plus Gold' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 3 | No cliche words | Not found | NONE | PASS |
| 4 | Distinctive visual or composition | [ON-VIDEO] 'A large slice of pepperoni pizza is held by a hand' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 5 | Differentiation word | Not found | NONE | FAIL |
Celebrities, Animated Characters or Mascots
Score: NOT SCORED
Emotional Resonance & Persuasiveness
2/5
| # | Criterion | Evaluation | Source | Result |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Human face visible | Not found | NONE | FAIL |
| 2 | Emotion word in text | [ON-VIDEO] 'delicious' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 3 | Multiple people | Not found | NONE | FAIL |
| 4 | Proof element | Not found | NONE | FAIL |
| 5 | Urgency word | [ON-VIDEO] 'now' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
Brand Recognition & Impact
4/5
| # | Criterion | Evaluation | Source | Result |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Brand visible | [ON-VIDEO] 'deliveroo' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 2 | Brand + benefit same sentence | [ON-VIDEO] 'deliveroo plus⁺' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 3 | Tagline exists | Not found | NONE | FAIL |
| 4 | Brand appears 2+ times | [ON-VIDEO] 'deliveroo' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 5 | Product given hero treatment | [ON-VIDEO] 'A large slice of pepperoni pizza is held by a hand' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
Call-to-Action Clarity
4/5
| # | Criterion | Evaluation | Source | Result |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Action verb exists | [ON-VIDEO] 'Sign up to' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 2 | CTA has object | [ON-VIDEO] 'Sign up to Plus Gold now' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 3 | Incentive stated | [ON-VIDEO] '10%' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 4 | Time limit stated | Not found | NONE | FAIL |
| 5 | Button or link visible | [ON-VIDEO] 'https://deliveroo.co.uk/legal.' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
Shareability & Retention
4/5
| # | Criterion | Evaluation | Source | Result |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Hook in first 5 words | [ON-VIDEO] 'deliveroo' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 2 | Short phrase exists | [ON-VIDEO] 'Plus Gold now' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 3 | Single topic | [ON-VIDEO] 'Sign up to Plus Gold now' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 4 | Repetition or rhyme | [ON-VIDEO] 'plus' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 5 | Engagement trigger | Not found | NONE | FAIL |
Overall Effectiveness
5/5
| # | Criterion | Evaluation | Source | Result |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Product prominently displayed | [ON-VIDEO] 'Deliveroo Plus Gold' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 2 | Comparison word | [ON-VIDEO] 'plus' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 3 | Reassurance word | [ON-VIDEO] 'cancel anytime' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 4 | Consistent style | [ON-VIDEO] 'Upbeat, energetic, electronic music with a driving beat.' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 5 | CTA exists | [ON-VIDEO] 'Sign up to' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
Brand Asset Distinctiveness
5/5
| # | Criterion | Evaluation | Source | Result |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Brand visible in top half | [ON-VIDEO] 'deliveroo' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 2 | Proprietary visual asset | [ON-VIDEO] 'A dynamic transition where the screen is divided into four quadrants' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 3 | Distinctive brand styling | [ON-VIDEO] 'deliveroo' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 4 | Specific claim with number | [ON-VIDEO] '10%' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 5 | Brand name in image AND text | [ON-VIDEO] 'deliveroo' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
Spike Rating — Short-Term Sales
5/5
| # | Criterion | Evaluation | Source | Result |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Brand near CTA | [ON-VIDEO] 'Sign up to Plus Gold now' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 2 | Bright colors | [ON-VIDEO] 'bright teal/turquoise' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 3 | Brand among largest text | [ON-VIDEO] 'deliveroo' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 4 | Price, offer, or value statement | [ON-VIDEO] '10%' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 5 | Brand at bottom | [ON-VIDEO] 'Plus Gold monthly subscription fee payable' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
Cognitive Neuro Balance
5/5
RIGHT-BRAIN ELEMENTS: R-count = R1,R4,R5 = 3
LEFT-BRAIN ELEMENTS: L-count = L1,L2,L4,L5 = 4 Difference = |3 – 4| = 1 Total = 3 + 4 = 7
| # | Criterion | Evaluation | Source | Result |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | 2+ R-brain elements | PASS | NONE | PASS |
| 2 | 2+ L-brain elements | PASS | NONE | PASS |
| 3 | Not all one side | PASS | NONE | PASS |
| 4 | Counts within 3 | PASS | NONE | PASS |
| 5 | At least 4 total | PASS | NONE | PASS |
Platform Delivery & Visibility
4/5
| # | Criterion | Evaluation | Source | Result |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Benefit in visible text | [ON-VIDEO] 'special' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 2 | CTA in visible area | [ON-VIDEO] 'Sign up to' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 3 | Logo efficiency | Not found | NONE | FAIL |
| 4 | Key text in top half | [ON-VIDEO] 'deliveroo' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 5 | One message only | [ON-VIDEO] 'Deliveroo Plus Gold' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
Goal Alignment & Strategic Intent
5/5
| # | Criterion | Evaluation | Source | Result |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Goal keyword in ad text | [ON-VIDEO] 'sign up' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 2 | CTA verb present | [ON-VIDEO] 'Sign up to' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 3 | Product or brand visible | [ON-VIDEO] 'deliveroo' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 4 | Action path exists | [ON-VIDEO] 'https://deliveroo.co.uk/legal.' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 5 | Single intent | [ON-VIDEO] 'Sign up to' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
Compliance Check
5/5
| # | Criterion | Evaluation | Source | Result |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | No superlatives without proof | Not found | NONE | PASS |
| 2 | No prohibited content | Not found | NONE | PASS |
| 3 | Disclaimers if needed | [ON-VIDEO] 'Plus Gold monthly subscription fee payable, cancel anytime.' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 4 | Price is complete | [ON-VIDEO] 'monthly subscription fee payable' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 5 | Age appropriate | Not found | NONE | PASS |
Penalties
- Multi-tagline penaltyNO
- Commercial reality penaltyNO
Total calculation
What’s working well
- Brand repetition: Deliveroo appears early and often by reinforcing recognition across the opening and closing frames.
- Clear offer: The 10% credit-back message works by stating a concrete benefit in large on-screen text.
- Custom motion graphics: The split-color transitions work by giving the ad a branded, memorable visual rhythm.
- Direct CTA: 'Sign up to Plus Gold now' works by telling viewers exactly what action to take.
- Legal reassurance: 'cancel anytime' works by reducing friction through a simple reassurance statement.
Key recommendations
- Core Message & Clarity: Simplify the copy by reducing end-card text and keeping one headline plus one offer line.
- Originality: Add a differentiating claim by stating one unique Plus Gold feature in a short branded line.
- Call-to-Action Clarity: Add urgency by including a deadline or limited-time note beside the signup message.
- Brand Recognition & Impact: Add a reusable tagline by placing a short brand phrase under the Deliveroo logo.
- Platform Delivery & Visibility: Make the signup path clearer by showing a direct button or landing URL instead of only legal text.
- Inclusive Representation: Ensure creative reflects diverse demographics, ages, and backgrounds to maximize audience connection.
Competitive landscape
- Competitors analyzed
- Uber Eats, Just Eat, Deliveroo
- What stands out
- Deliveroo uses a subscription-led offer with bold purple and teal graphics. The ad focuses on credit-back value rather than delivery speed or restaurant breadth.
- Color and visual style
- Deliveroo is more neon and graphic than typical competitor food ads, with a cleaner motion-design look.
- Messaging approach
- Deliveroo emphasizes membership value and sign-up urgency, while competitors often stress convenience or restaurant choice.
- Opportunity
- Differentiate further by showing one concrete member benefit in use, such as a saved-order or checkout example.