Core Message & Clarity
5/5
| # | Criterion | Evaluation | Source | Result |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Benefit word exists | [AUDIO] 'Make wicked savings' | AUDIO | PASS |
| 2 | Brand/product name exists | [AUDIO] 'with Deliveroo Plus.' | AUDIO | PASS |
| 3 | No more than one tagline | [AUDIO] 'Make wicked savings' | AUDIO | PASS |
| 4 | Audience word exists | [AUDIO] 'Sign up and start living that Plus life.' | AUDIO | PASS |
| 5 | Product visible | [ON-VIDEO] 'deliveroo plus' logo on smartphone screen | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
Originality
3/5
| # | Criterion | Evaluation | Source | Result |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Non-stock visual | [ON-VIDEO] 'large volcano erupting' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 2 | Brand-specific words | Not found ([IMAGE-PACKAGE] not eligible for this criterion) | NONE | FAIL |
| 3 | No cliche words | Not found | NONE | PASS |
| 4 | Distinctive visual or composition | [ON-VIDEO] 'a large, framed painting of a man with white hair riding a black winged unicorn' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 5 | Differentiation word | [AUDIO] 'even better' | AUDIO | FAIL |
Celebrities, Animated Characters or Mascots
Score: NOT SCORED
Emotional Resonance & Persuasiveness
4/5
| # | Criterion | Evaluation | Source | Result |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Human face visible | [ON-VIDEO] 'Close-up on the man with white hair' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 2 | Emotion word in text | [AUDIO] 'excited' | AUDIO | PASS |
| 3 | Multiple people | [ON-VIDEO] 'Two older people (a man and a woman with white hair)' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 4 | Proof element | Not found | NONE | FAIL |
| 5 | Urgency word | [AUDIO] 'now' | AUDIO | PASS |
Brand Recognition & Impact
5/5
| # | Criterion | Evaluation | Source | Result |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Brand visible | [ON-VIDEO] 'deliveroo plus' logo on smartphone screen | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 2 | Brand + benefit same sentence | [AUDIO] 'with Deliveroo Plus.' | AUDIO | PASS |
| 3 | Tagline exists | [AUDIO] 'Make wicked savings' | AUDIO | PASS |
| 4 | Brand appears 2+ times | [AUDIO] 'Deliveroo Plus' | AUDIO | PASS |
| 5 | Product given hero treatment | [ON-VIDEO] 'holding a smartphone' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
Call-to-Action Clarity
4/5
| # | Criterion | Evaluation | Source | Result |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Action verb exists | [AUDIO] 'Sign up' | AUDIO | PASS |
| 2 | CTA has object | [AUDIO] 'Sign up and start living that Plus life.' | AUDIO | PASS |
| 3 | Incentive stated | [ON-VIDEO] 'FREE DELIVERY' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 4 | Time limit stated | Not found | NONE | FAIL |
| 5 | Button or link visible | [ON-VIDEO] 'FREE DELIVERY' button on smartphone screen | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
Shareability & Retention
3/5
| # | Criterion | Evaluation | Source | Result |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Hook in first 5 words | [AUDIO] 'Make wicked savings' | AUDIO | PASS |
| 2 | Short phrase exists | [AUDIO] 'Plus life' | AUDIO | PASS |
| 3 | Single topic | [AUDIO] 'with Deliveroo Plus.' | AUDIO | PASS |
| 4 | Repetition or rhyme | Not found ([IMAGE-PACKAGE] not eligible for this criterion) | NONE | FAIL |
| 5 | Engagement trigger | Not found | NONE | FAIL |
Overall Effectiveness
5/5
| # | Criterion | Evaluation | Source | Result |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Product prominently displayed | [ON-VIDEO] 'Deliveroo Plus paper bag is prominently displayed on an easel' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 2 | Comparison word | [AUDIO] 'better' | AUDIO | PASS |
| 3 | Reassurance word | [AUDIO] 'easy' | AUDIO | PASS |
| 4 | Consistent style | [AUDIO] 'slightly quirky, and playful electronic music' | AUDIO | PASS |
| 5 | CTA exists | [AUDIO] 'Sign up' | AUDIO | PASS |
Brand Asset Distinctiveness
5/5
| # | Criterion | Evaluation | Source | Result |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Brand visible in top half | [ON-VIDEO] 'deliveroo plus' logo on smartphone screen | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 2 | Proprietary visual asset | [ON-VIDEO] 'a large volcano erupting' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 3 | Distinctive brand styling | [ON-VIDEO] 'deliveroo plus' logo at the top | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 4 | Specific claim with number | [ON-VIDEO] 'YOU'VE SAVED £££' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 5 | Brand name in image AND text | [ON-VIDEO] 'deliveroo plus' logo on smartphone screen | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
Spike Rating — Short-Term Sales
4/5
| # | Criterion | Evaluation | Source | Result |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Brand near CTA | [ON-VIDEO] 'deliveroo plus' logo on smartphone screen | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 2 | Bright colors | [ON-VIDEO] 'large green button' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 3 | Brand among largest text | Not found | NONE | FAIL |
| 4 | Price, offer, or value statement | [ON-VIDEO] 'YOU'VE SAVED £££' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 5 | Brand at bottom | [ON-VIDEO] 'lower-third text' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
Cognitive Neuro Balance
5/5
RIGHT-BRAIN ELEMENTS: R-count = R1,R2,R3,R4,R5 = 5
LEFT-BRAIN ELEMENTS: L-count = L1,L2,L4,L5 = 4 Difference = |5 – 4| = 1 Total = 5 + 4 = 9
| # | Criterion | Evaluation | Source | Result |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | 2+ R-brain elements | PASS | NONE | PASS |
| 2 | 2+ L-brain elements | PASS | NONE | PASS |
| 3 | Not all one side | PASS | NONE | PASS |
| 4 | Counts within 3 | PASS | NONE | PASS |
| 5 | At least 4 total | PASS | NONE | PASS |
Platform Delivery & Visibility
5/5
| # | Criterion | Evaluation | Source | Result |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Benefit in visible text | [ON-VIDEO] 'FREE DELIVERY' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 2 | CTA in visible area | [AUDIO] 'Sign up' | AUDIO | PASS |
| 3 | Logo efficiency | PASS | NONE | PASS |
| 4 | Key text in top half | [AUDIO] 'Make wicked savings' | AUDIO | PASS |
| 5 | One message only | PASS | NONE | PASS |
Goal Alignment & Strategic Intent
5/5
| # | Criterion | Evaluation | Source | Result |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Goal keyword in ad text | [AUDIO] 'Sign up' | AUDIO | PASS |
| 2 | CTA verb present | [AUDIO] 'Sign up' | AUDIO | PASS |
| 3 | Product or brand visible | [ON-VIDEO] 'deliveroo plus' logo on smartphone screen | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 4 | Action path exists | [ON-VIDEO] 'large green button' | ON-VIDEO | PASS |
| 5 | Single intent | PASS | NONE | PASS |
Compliance Check
5/5
| # | Criterion | Evaluation | Source | Result |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | No superlatives without proof | Not found | NONE | PASS |
| 2 | No prohibited content | Not found | NONE | PASS |
| 3 | Disclaimers if needed | Not found | NONE | PASS |
| 4 | Price is complete | Not found | NONE | PASS |
| 5 | Age appropriate | PASS | NONE | PASS |
Penalties
- Multi-tagline penaltyNO
- Commercial reality penaltyNO
Total calculation
What’s working well
- Brand visibility: Deliveroo Plus appears repeatedly by keeping the app screen and spoken name central.
- Savings message: 'FREE DELIVERY' and 'YOU'VE SAVED £££' work by making the value immediate.
- Distinctive setting: The volcano and lava scene work by making the ad memorable and unusual.
- CTA clarity: 'Sign up' works by giving a direct action path.
- Social proof tone: Group dining works by showing the offer shared with others.
Key recommendations
- Brand Recognition: Add a brief end-card logo reveal by isolating Deliveroo Plus for 1-2 seconds.
- Overall Effectiveness: Add a proof point by showing a rating or customer count in the final frame.
- Call-to-Action Clarity: Add urgency by including a deadline or limited-time offer in the CTA frame.
- Spike Rating — Short-Term Sales: Increase urgency by enlarging the brand mark beside the savings claim.
- Platform Delivery & Visibility: Add a short caption by repeating the savings line in the first frame.
- Inclusive Representation: Ensure creative reflects diverse demographics, ages, and backgrounds to maximize audience connection.
Competitive landscape
- Competitors analyzed
- Uber Eats, Just Eat, Deliveroo
- What stands out
- Deliveroo uses a surreal volcanic fantasy and a theatrical character, unlike the more routine delivery-service framing common in competitors. The ad leans into playful excess while keeping the offer clear.
- Color and visual style
- Deliveroo mixes dark volcanic reds with purple-green app branding; Uber Eats and Just Eat typically rely on cleaner, more utilitarian delivery visuals
- Messaging approach
- Deliveroo emphasizes savings and Plus membership through humor and spectacle, while competitors often stress convenience or restaurant choice.
- Opportunity
- Separate further by adding one concrete membership benefit in a cleaner end card.